Makes me want to watch an action thriller.
This tune makes me want to watch an action thriller movie. With gangs loading up their guns, robbing a bank, putting up a suspense on whats going to happen next. Just like how this song makes me want to feel. So heres the rundown dude, you managed to focus on the emotions of the viewers and how they will feel (whether you cared about that or not), you added flavor, theme, lack of creativity because you can hear this type of music all the time, quanity was in there also. So it just needs a tune up on the quality.
Good luck on your future submissions.
Grind29